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Re: Crush
She stares across the sea of endless desks. At him. Does he know her? Probably not. Does she know him? Of course. She folds a piece of paper into a ...
Feb 5, 2007 -
Re: It's red, it's blue
Sally's shoe: it's red. Or is it blue? That's the argument they say that happened on that day. Jimmy tackled John and Kate yelled at Nate and they were all ...
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: I'm On My Own Now
I liked your song, but the theme wasn't...expanded on. It seemed like you were stuck.
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: Natural Photography
Your pictures were taken soooo close up! how did you do it? Maybe you could take some pictures of other animals,like deer. they would be cooler.
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: Bored. :]!
I liked your picture. The expressions were wonderful. Maybe you could add some definition to the lines though. And the clothes didn't look right.
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: As the Sun Rises
Your poem didn't really have any dimension. It reads like a flat surface, with nothing for the mind to grab. I did like how it wasn't dark or depressing, though.
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: Messages and Bottles
I liked your poem, but the subject wasn't really clear.
Feb 4, 2007 -
Re: Hello? (What do I say!!!!!!!!!!!)
:) Hi. I guess this is mandatory right? Done. Bye.
Feb 4, 2007
