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CK Lynn

  • Other Poetry Re: Crush

    She stares across the sea of endless desks. At him. Does he know her? Probably not. Does she know him? Of course. She folds a piece of paper into a ...

    Feb 5, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: It's red, it's blue

    Sally's shoe: it's red. Or is it blue? That's the argument they say that happened on that day. Jimmy tackled John and Kate yelled at Nate and they were all ...

    Feb 4, 2007
  • Lyrics Re: I'm On My Own Now

    I liked your song, but the theme wasn't...expanded on. It seemed like you were stuck.

    Feb 4, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Natural Photography

    Your pictures were taken soooo close up! how did you do it? Maybe you could take some pictures of other animals,like deer. they would be cooler.

    Feb 4, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Bored. :]!

    I liked your picture. The expressions were wonderful. Maybe you could add some definition to the lines though. And the clothes didn't look right.

    Feb 4, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: As the Sun Rises

    Your poem didn't really have any dimension. It reads like a flat surface, with nothing for the mind to grab. I did like how it wasn't dark or depressing, though.

    Feb 4, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Messages and Bottles

    I liked your poem, but the subject wasn't really clear.

    Feb 4, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello? (What do I say!!!!!!!!!!!)

    :) Hi. I guess this is mandatory right? Done. Bye.

    Feb 4, 2007


You sound like you're becoming emotionally involved with the custard.
— Nikki Morgan